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He loves me..He loves me not.. by ~FallenSnowsTears:iconFallenSnowsTears:





He loves me...
he loves me not.
Is this what I really sought?
the flowers pedals,
dipped with medals...
of gold and silver moons.
As the sun shines golden,
and I count away...
is this how love is to be played?
My mind wonders on through time...
to a place of brilliance and a place of rhyme.
He loves me...
he loves me not.
Is this what I really sought?
the grains of sand, left in my hand...
Show a star of hope.
but to believe it so true,
does this mean I'll actually find you?
to see unclouded and finally at peace.
'will the pain of lonliness ever cease?'
He loves me...
he loves me not.
Is this what I really sought?
©2005-2009 ~FallenSnowsTears
:iconfallensnowstears:

Author's Comments

I wrote this a long time ago, yet it rings true..somehow..I never shared it before..I dunno how it will come across here.. or with the person I care for...
Its odd, awkward, yet sound , and rythmic... I dont know what words could describe it, so I shall just have to type it up for you, and wait and see how it goes.

:blackrose: :heart: :spyed: :heart: :blackrose:

I still dont know how good it is..it was a sad attempt so long ago.. and I am not sure how he will take it..
I dont mean it to impose my feelings..merely to share them..hopefully..it is taken the right way.. I can only hope..

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:iconkyoki-intonsha:
did you draw the picture that goes with it ?.

oh my god....is awesome picture!.

:hug:
:icontherony:
I don't think you have to worry about it being taken the wrong way. If the poem goes astray the descrip won't.

--
Since we can't call people without wings angels, we call them friends.

The Insanely Sane Guardian Dragon
:iconfallensnowstears:
haha..thnx! :lmao: I really didn't think it would be taken so badly..lolz.. I just think I was a bit nervous..considering that Im actually pouring out my heart and all.. and for the first time, dont know what to expect! (0_0) ..(;^_^)
ah well..thnx though for your words! :hug: :heart:

--
"The hidden world is a dream, like the truth of a night's memory"
~Clamp
:floating::snowflake::heart::snowflake::floating:
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:iconkyoki-intonsha:
LOL . ramblequeen.

the pic just caught my eye, its REALY good>

:hug:
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:iconkyoki-intonsha:
flying demons and good pictures....awesome!.

:hug:

no im not just sayining it, im a visual thinker so i like to see cool pictures. tis all.

:glomp: :heart:
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:iconkyoki-intonsha:
awww :hug: if i could blush i would.

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